Train Poster Draft update

The closest form of finality for the train poster is presented now, the romanticism has been refigured. The focus on romanticism has been reduced and the focus on that and started to focus on the logistical  part of the poster. The addition of the american outline had been introduced and clear line of transportation in addition a better visual for the stops had been added. Refinements such as type and some little attributes will be added to it before being "officially" printed.

here is the design used for the critique which had a couple issues that needed to be looked at. In comparison it was very romantic over more informational. These issues would be the main focus after critique to add more of a balance. 

After a decent amount of reflection this is what came out of the changes.

Now that the design was being transformed, there was a concern that it was basically monochrome. So I went from this to get here.

color change was important and to add some depth I added the train passing through the city and mountains, headed to its final destination. 

As of right now more logistical elements are being added such as miles travelled, Im interested in adding time, etc. As more is added more pictures will be added to present the changes.